Fucking in McDonalds reviews

What can i say about this story.. about the same thing i could say about the food at McDonalds..

hmmm this one was left under the heat lamps for to short a time.just a rushed excuse to throw in a bad sex scene.try harder next time

Good luck.

Way way way way too short. Put more detail.

now you know where the secret sauce cums from....lmao

hmmm. ok.

sorry mate i have to agree with the other peeps. this story could of had serious potential but was rushed, too short, and not enough detail. its like some of my first drafts, keep trying and good luck

it sucked ass you dumb ass mother fucking bitch learn how to write a fucking sex story dumb ass bitch

wot a waste of time

The reviews are more entertaining than the story. Good luck with your next story, you have a lot of improving to do.

all i have to say is that it sucked

the story is to short,there is no hot sex.the person who wrote this story have to improve a lot.

this story really sucked...it just didnt have enough detail to it..DONT READ IT!!!!!!

This kinda sucks... but it reminds me of my sister.. she works at mcdonalds and she's having an affair with her co-worker...

It was short, maybe too short, um...like the fact it was at mc.donalds...now I wont eat there ever again. LMAO

please tell how You Can Fuck With Me

That was dumb as fuck!

howdy Ya! my name is steve. and i work at the LA Mcdonalds on 5th street. i once fucked the shit out of this one guy in the back counter. it was great. he was taking my nine incher like nothing.

bhanchod kya tuchu story thi

nice story though 2 short

asshole

What aload of shit, put abit of L-BO grease into your next one.

well it was ok

Never turne me on at all try again mate that was rubbish

the story needs more detail and needs more of a twist the 2 need to continue the fucking after they quit in the car or at 1 of their apartments

too short, but alright. It's a real good start tho.

that has 2 be the dumbest fucking story ever u probaly some dumb asshole who thought writing a story with a cathy name would be funny but its the dumbest fucking story ever do us a favor and never EVER FUCKING write again

I bet u guys made those fries extra salty

sad, way too short, no depth to the story at all.did this person ever stay awake in english class?

nice one

That was sooo weak

that was so retarded its not even good

its a boring story all together

fuck me fuck me that was SEXY

Very very nice