What a fab story, bit of romance, bit of sexual tension, some nice details. Not too slutty either!
Posted by Another reader
Very well written. The sexual tension, as well as the emotion was palpable.
Posted by Derek
GREAT story. I almost cried. Good Romance, Good sexual tension. Best story i've ever read on here.
Posted by just another critic
Great story, well written, sexy but not graphic.
Posted by bigdog
That was a great story .
Posted by Shadow
not bad kid
Posted by Lisa
Beautiful story! The best I've ever read here. Thank you for a wonderful feeling...
Posted by someone
Definitely the best story I've ever read here... wow.
Posted by Shawn Mychael
It is not often that I can say that I enjoyed A True Love Story. Extremly well written, I look forward to others.
Posted by Adam
brilliant! reminds me of how i met my girl... made me remember why i love her so much. cheers!
Posted by Mark
lol yeah right extremely well written? "We moved to the moon's tidal beat, ebb and flow, the oldest rythem in the universe." Give me a fuckin break. This are sex stories idiot not your ideas for a philosophical romance novel.
Posted by glidingdale
Wow! Oh my god. That was easily the best story I ever read and to Mark you're a sex-crazed lunatic and you need to get a life. That was a great book and was definately better than everyone I ever read. Keep writing. Awesome story. Absolutely fabulous.
Posted by mulberry
thanks for share!
Posted by ronni
The best story I have read here..,I hope you write more ...it had everything misery of youth the inability to communicate in with the other sex ..love...tenderness and sex raw but sensual.... I am a fan already........
Posted by john bridger
beutifull, romantic, moving. i loved it love john
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