Darren reviews

Excellent story. Very artistic in it's format and language. I like the lacing of God through out, the reoccuring presence of water in the seduction of both boys, but mostly the fact that you didn't gorge on too many slangy words. Such writing is rather encouraging to find.

Very nice, well-written story. I absolutely love it! It was a bit odd though, it's like they were in the pool then it suddenly switchd to the bedroom.

Very difficult to follow the story, kept switching scenes ... would have been better to follow in specific order