Crimson Kiss. reviews

The plot for this story is excellent, however nothing more than a kiss happens. There are some great ideas here and this would be brilliant for a novel. Or you could change some of this to include some more sex scene, with the female twins for example. Either way don't leave it where you have, continue on to make this your best story yet!

WHERE'S THE REST OF THE STORY?? Its actually sooo good I really want to read the rest of it...

Is that it?!?! o.o omg, i thought this was finally gonna b some actual sex 'n it ends.... plz plz write more 'cuz this story is awesome...

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