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Posted by QuartzOrb
Sexy! I liked how she not only went to the beach in search of conventional fun, but was also open to getting herself lucky if she could manage it. It could use some more detail as well as a few more characters to round it all out. But, a great first attempt.
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(In which our hero, Jorge, settles some old affairs, honors some old traditions and pulls off the hat trick with Serenity's lovely ladies in our little ship on the edge of the black.)

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