Best friends reviews
your story is very hard to read with all the he was, and I was like. Very sloppy writing.
If you like take the word like out of your writing it would like be like you know easier to like read.
You really need to learn not to use the word like...otherwise it wasn't too bad.
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As an author of real enooks Shadow Parker finds herself using the net more for her own personal toy. Is she amusing herself or you? Is she a user or loves to be used? U B the judge. |
Stories By Niche:
- indian
- short
- ghost
- porn
- scary
- bedtime
- bdsm
- spanking
- adult
- inspirational
- funny
- love
- xxx
- cuckold
- hot
- bondage
- motivational
- horror
- moral
- black
- romantic
- bible
- wedgie
- femdom
- real wife
- diaper
- sissy
- mind control
- gangbang
- milf
- threesome
- success
- female masturbation
- christmas
- foot fetish
- erotica
- bullying
- dirty
- naughty
- taboo
- fuck
- blowjob
- facesitting