Avasa (Part II) reviews

ok, i'll write here only cuz i read them both in one sitting. You are an absolutely AMAZING writer, and your stories cause a plethora of emotions to race through me every time i read one. the story rocked. 'nuf said. also, not only do i wonder about your stories related to your personal experiences, but also i am interested in what your characters say- and wonder which characters you "speak through," in a sense. Good job; i look forward to more.

This is the kind of love story I love, in depth, yet with a very sexy undertone. I wanted to cry with and laugh with them. After reading both, I cant wait to hear more.

damm....brand new writer..dat's de best story i've ever read in my life..truely..u rilly kno u'r stuff....and i dun reed dat much 2 b onest....u got sum real talent...for a second..i was hopin dis story wud jus keep goin..lol'z..kno wat i mean?..can't wait 4 u'r nxt 1!

well, i'd say one big one. just cause the damned thing is updated so infrequently. or try a few really big bits. you know? anyway, ac- that sounds good. eminem??? eeewww.... no offense. i can only stand him in small doses. i'm rockin out to Tori Amos and TATU and i just submitted another godawful autobiographical thing. well, good luck ac. and peace out to all u guys. this is getting fun. PEACE!

haha... and i'm sure new writer must be flattered that we're using her lovely piece as our chat forum. how cute...!

thanx, ac. but i haven't heard christina's song yet- i guess i will when i get the chance. you're so lucky with the instruments. i don't play a damned thing. my g/f's trying to teach me guitar, but i can't quite get it. well... i gotta go. can't wait to hear your story. peace out.

exciting,we are more horny after reading this, we want move down on each other.we need more 69 expresion.

LOVED STORY VERY MUCH ...KEEP WRITEING MORE PLEASE...I FELT LIKE I WAS READING A BOOK AND THAT IMPRESSED ME ....IT SHOWED THAT US LESBIANS AND GAY MEN AND ALL OTHERS HERE IN U.S.A CAN EXPRESS OUR FEELINGS AND I AS A LUCKY ONE MY FAMILY UNDERSTANDS MY LIFE STYLE COMPARE TO OTHER COUNTRIESAS THIS STORY SHOWED OF THE HARDSHIPS OUR BROTHERS AND SISTERS GO THREW..SO THANK U FOR A VERY GREAT STORY AND PLEASE MORE

u make me cry. I'm what u might call one of those White European girls and my parents h8 gays/les. I'm in a relationship with a traswomen and can completely relate to not knowing how 2 explian how much u love someone. Thank u 4 sharing ur amazing work with the world. I'm so glad I found it.

omg wow how amazing was this story but it had me in tears, my gf, told me to read it and i did and was worth every minut just wanted it to go very well written and detailed, but have to say alot of this relates to me and my gf and thats y it was soo touching and im very happy with the ending so sweet xxx amazing proberly one of the best storys i have ever read xxx