After school studying reviews
Work on dialogue spacing for future efforts, but this first story was a good effort.
Very nice a few typos here and there but other wise nice context and all. You shoud definetly make a part 2 it has potential.
Thx for the input everyone... Haven't shown up around here for a while... working on more stuff.. but thanks for the input
i liked this story alot...
Would u fuck me like that?
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Natalie gets a new job though a bit reluctant to tell her children about it. Another first time story about how Mark might just get to see his mom nude, and maybe, his sister as well... |
Stories By Niche:
- indian
- short
- ghost
- porn
- scary
- bedtime
- bdsm
- spanking
- adult
- inspirational
- funny
- love
- xxx
- cuckold
- hot
- bondage
- motivational
- horror
- moral
- black
- romantic
- bible
- wedgie
- femdom
- real wife
- diaper
- sissy
- mind control
- gangbang
- milf
- threesome
- success
- female masturbation
- christmas
- foot fetish
- erotica
- bullying
- dirty
- naughty
- taboo
- fuck
- blowjob
- facesitting