After School reviews
This story is neither !!! or !?! Having most sentences overly exclamatory becomes boring. Dialogue treatment needs to be improved.
Learn how to use the enter key. And the period button as well.See that? Learn what that is, and then use it.
the dialouge confused me.
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As I reclined on my bed and opened my robe, I slid my hand down toward my yoni which was still tingling with anticipation and then I was suddenly back in the inner chambers of the Sultan’s house with a soft warm Middle Eastern breeze blowing through the open window... |
Stories By Niche:
- indian
- short
- ghost
- porn
- scary
- bedtime
- bdsm
- spanking
- adult
- inspirational
- funny
- love
- xxx
- cuckold
- hot
- bondage
- motivational
- horror
- moral
- black
- romantic
- bible
- wedgie
- femdom
- real wife
- diaper
- sissy
- mind control
- gangbang
- milf
- threesome
- success
- female masturbation
- christmas
- foot fetish
- erotica
- bullying
- dirty
- naughty
- taboo
- fuck
- blowjob
- facesitting