4 some in college vacation reviews
One of the stupidist stories I have ever read.
Pretty good, but you should really stop switching between 1st andthird person, it was really ditracting
Doesn't flow very well and the shift in person is not good. It sounds more like a teen-age boys secret dream. Not bad for a first effort, but learn from your mistakes and do a better editing job in the future.
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This story is based on true events. Some of it is reality and the rest is fantasy. Afraid of the unknown and being hurt, I acted it out on paper instead of reality. I ask you to bare with me, considering I didn't jump straight to the sex scene... |
Stories By Niche:
- indian
- short
- ghost
- porn
- scary
- bedtime
- bdsm
- spanking
- adult
- inspirational
- funny
- love
- xxx
- cuckold
- hot
- bondage
- motivational
- horror
- moral
- black
- romantic
- bible
- wedgie
- femdom
- real wife
- diaper
- sissy
- mind control
- gangbang
- milf
- threesome
- success
- female masturbation
- christmas
- foot fetish
- erotica
- bullying
- dirty
- naughty
- taboo
- fuck
- blowjob
- facesitting