World's Best Mom reviews

Amazing and touching lustful story man.. Keep righting, the description of sacrifice was adept, so sultry n good

A very long story indeed. You write like you've prepared this to be read at some Board Meeting. You should stick to the lustful and erotic terms used in everyday erotica. I got almost half way through and decided, enough of this 'shit'. Your mastery of the English Language is very admirable but has no place in a incestrial story read by everyday people. Quite frankly, It's A Turnoff--just one reader's opinion