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Posted by Lord Daemon Silverdawn
You make me sick..People with minds like your need to be killed..dont give me that shit about you saying I would never rape...your sick mind thought of this and if givin the chance you would rape ...This story was pathetic and made me want to puke....perhaps a bunch of men should find were your mother lives or were a woman you care about lives and rape her like that...I will be praying that it does to tech your sick ass a leason!
Posted by John Field
Dude, I told you not to read it if you'd be offended. It's right there in the story description. Why can't you see that rape can play a part in fantasy? I would NEVER rape. Real me don't need to. It's just that for some, the idea of it can be a turn on, and goes no farther than that. I am not sick, and would never rape or hurt anyone. Stop being such a dick.
Posted by disgusted citizen
you are a disgusting pervert what ever you say, the best thing you could do is delete this story and sign your self up for shock therapy.
how can this be a turn on? a sick, smelly old man being hated by a young woman? as if any hostage in that situation would get hard from this!
you may say you dont want to rape some one, but what if it encourages other ppl to rape some one? ever thought about that???
Posted by John Field
Hey, other people are responsible for their own actions, not me. People can read about rape in newspapers, books, magazines, whatever. My story will not make people go out and commit rape. That is up to them.
I told you people not to read this if you would be offended by it. I suggest you open your fucking mind.
Posted by minx
i read this story it real truth b/c i m also victim of this thing once in life but not in such a terrible way but the way that baby busted fucked by gangster its annoying .and that real picture of the of human sociey in every part of the world and we girls are the victim of man sex lust . so it really turn me on . i have once rape by mine relative and he make mine life a hell ..... and don't wana share mine story further its
baby of victim
Posted by a sickend citizen
you are sick its nothing about open minded or anything its something u want to do a fantasy u want to do
and thats just SICK
how can u write about a 19y old girl thats get raped by bikers for hours and prolly her whole life would be ruined
these things happen every day and girls who go trough this suffer from it every day for the rest of there broken lifes
u are sick , go to a doctor u need 1
u can telml about rape, so u can probaply do it 2
Posted by August Alvarez
In my humble opinion and I can only speak for myself, I think that it is important to read a story like this objectively, just as we would a story about incest, murder, robbery ect. We are suppose to be critiquing story content, phrasing, ideas, grammar, spelling ect and NOT laying judment or making unfair blanket statements about the writer, based on an idea.
This is a fictional piece and I seriously doubt that the writer secretly condones rape, just as I'm sure for example, John Carpender from the Holloween sagas, secretly enjoys the idea of a mad man who preys on and murders at will, young unsuspecting girls in the middle of the night.
There are countless movies, books, plays where the subject matter is rape; for example, The Accused in which Jodie Foster won an Oscar for her pertrayal of a woman who was gang raped and I think it's safe to say, that Jodie Foster nor those in the film who pertrayed the rapists, condone rape; and the movie was based on an actual incident.
I am not in any way trying to be insensitve to those who found the story unnerving and were offended, but we are writers and it is our imaginations that generally dictate where a story will lead and sometimes, it can lead us into dark and forbidden places, but this does not mean that we are secretly depraved monsters for expressing these ideas on paper.
I thought that your discriptions were very realistic John and brought out in me feelings of anger, fear, sadness, rage, all the emotions that are brought to the surface by a good story. I enjoyed especially the news bulletin, where we learn about Bill's fate. I thought that you wrapped it all up nicely in the end.
What you described is unfortunately, the very dark side of human nature and a side that most of us (myself included) would rather not have to look at, but nonetheless, these kinds of terrible tragedys to occur much to our discredit as a human race.
My only negative critique, would probably be that it went a little long in some places and again in my humble opinion, it might have been interesting to hear more from the other hostages and their thoughts, in more detail.
Over all though, I found it to be a good read. Good job my friend. :)
Posted by 035 171 016
Yes, this is a story of fantasy. I don't think it is sick or terrible, in fact...I like to read this story very much. I have been checking this website frequently to see if you (John Field) write any more of this type of gang rape stories. It really turned me on. Even when I reread it again and again, I am not bored and hopfully there will be some kind of this stories post on the web again. However, I have a request; that is, if you write a story like this one again next time...is it OK if you use the name Catherine as the female character and the name Carlos as the male character...thank you
Posted by LucOuarm
I hope that people who like this kind of stuff can read it and get over these fantasies. It is a topic that must be covered by our fictional work, but I prefer that someone else do the writing. I would really hate to hear that some idiots were instigated into this type of activity because the story convinced them that this was appropriate behavior.
Otherwise, well done.
Posted by SEVERUSMAX
I am more worried by Lord Daemon Silverdawn's pro-fascist remarks about censorship, than I am about the content of this story. I have read about rape quite a few times, and I have yet to commit one. There is a rape story in the interracial section by Chloe Smith, and I have read it, and instead of planning to help some wife rape her husband, while torturing him with a rubber band (the nature of the rape in the story), I would absolutely condemn such behavior.
Posted by DG
Listen,
Different strokes for different folks, this website is all about that. I have my weird tastes and fetishes but a rape scenerio ? That's not cool dude and I know you said if someone had a problem with it they should not read it. The situation is that raping your girl when she wants you to is role playing but to have a story of a young girl being raped by some cracker dirty bikers is not sexy. You are writing a story, fine, but remember the internet is full of sick people whom feed on stories like this let's not encourage them. Rape (non consentual is not sexy, it's sick.
Posted by Jenna Jameson
Was one of the best stories on this site..descriptive and well composed nice work!
Ignore the dick dribbles who bitch i bet they got wood over it x xx x
Posted by SEVERUSMAX
They probably did. Censorship is no solution.
Posted by SEVERUSMAX
Funny, too, taking the name of a famous porn star.
Posted by Lisa
I for one love rape/incest/murder/cannibal/etc. stories. And this is by far *one* of the best I've ever read. Keep up the amazing work.
I'm going to read it again!
Posted by Mellanie Hewlitt
Great story.....especially the bit about how the hostages were drawn into the act.
Posted by Alicia
I really like your stories! I'll be watchin for your next
Posted by The Abominable Black Man
I thought this story was pretty well-written. The action started right away without seeming forced, and you wrapped it up neatly and completely. As for the rest of these bitches crying about the subject matter; exactly how did you guys find this story anyway? Were you Googling "rainbows and lollipops", and somehow this site slipped through your filter (Damn you, Websense!) Fuck you guys, seriously. Implying that writing about rape is going to encourage someone to commit rape is just plain silly. Hell, I've read all of your responses and have no desire to get a lobotomy. Freedom of speech, folks. As my grandmother was fond of saying, "If you don't like freedom of speech, you should shut the fuck up!"
Posted by let's be real
You know, it's hilarious to me to hear these "concerned citizens" get up in arms over a story like this, when, in order to even view it, you have to browse the fetish section of a sex story website. Get off the high horses folks, my girlfriend and I act out forced sex fantasy all the time, and we love it. So next time all you "disgusted" people come here browsing for foot fucking, pregos, panties, or whatever apparently wholesome fetish it is that gets you off, remember, to each his own.
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