Trapped In Paradise reviews

Few spelling and grammar errors? I beg to differ. I began reading and stopped half way through, about to lose my temper. Please, if your going to submit a story, proof read before-hand.

Very good story. A little slow at times but is very detailed. I venture to guess you aren't from the states.

i am like ovid wishing for the sister! watch the spelling but all in all a very delicious story.

Thanks for the encouragement.