Posted by LucOuarm Too damned short!
Posted by Billy Not bad at all...
Posted by A Fan A very good story...just a little short. You are a promising writer, and I am sure if you keep at it, you can produce some really great stuff.
Posted by Billy Bob Should be removed from the sight. There is nothing "erotic" about a 50 yr old man and a 16 yr old girl!
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