Posted by Tom This is the kind of poetry I like most... Just rhythm, no rhyme... Loved it!
And to me it seems to be quite personal too...
Posted by SEVERUSMAX Fascinating, albeit weak on grammar. Pleasantly surprised that it was not about femdom.
Posted by jayson this sounds like the person (misstress) is you....
if this is true and your are female and in alaska well then "I'll see you around"
Posted by Lorenzo I agree with the first review, in that the rythm is really sly. A great mix of prose and hidden poetry. Very sexy, and enchanting.
Posted by nope nope this is terrible. garbage. be more descriptive, don't use the same word twice if you can think of another (i.e. ass-ass versus ass-anus or something like that) and write with some mystery, some intrigue, don't just be like "he does this, then this," but leave something to my imagination without being too ambiguous.
Posted by lucky very nice... i love like this..
Posted by larissa Dayum this was deep I real.ly lyked it
Diana grabbed Louise’s head hard and raised her ass up of the chair and yelled: “Suck it Louise! Suck my pussy baby girl! Oh yes! Like that just like that! Oh god I’m going to cum!”