Posted by "No One" This story was obviously written by a guy as the wording used in some parts was rather plain, lacking all emotional attachments to the sexual activity. My last comment was that the female emotions described here were bad as they lacked truthfulness and sincerity resulting in the female emotions described here coming across as unrealistic. My advice would be that when writing a story about two females try understanding how a female thinks and feels before you begin writing. By coming to this recognition from a female prospective the story will seem more convincing and will be enjoyed more.
Posted by Shadows This story was rather amuzing and agreeing with the first review this story was most definitly written with a lack of interest and a barest of imaginations, it seems though that the idea is well put. This story could use a better description of honest explenation as well as a thesaurus to expand the limited male vocabulary.
Posted by Matt Smokin'...;)~
Posted by Lawrence Myers Hi, I am a person that is lost. I never knew that there are others like me.I realy need to grt ahold of other intersexed people. please talk with me.
Posted by Ayub Cool
Posted by Ourfirstkisledtothis I never thought that I would like something like that but as I read I felt an urge to ya know.Anyway keep these one's up there great and I am eager to read on so let me get back to it......lol
Posted by manga I love the idea of this story it kicks into what i imagied possible if hermaphrodite really exist or not.
Posted by mach Great story I really enjoyed it... Made me really hard
Posted by josh very nice story it gave me hard just thinking about it
Posted by comsmith Very good story... it’s a great beginning for a really good series I'm looking forward to the next installment...
