Posted by Daniel Bonnici This story has a nice imaginative touch which one doesn't often find in these types of stories.
The final fulfillment is great, being left to the reader's imagination!
Posted by August Alvarez Hey Daniel, August here. Thanks so much for saying so. I am actually a professional musician, who has discovered writing and love it for better or worse. Is there anything that you might have done differently within the story? I have often been accused of using too many metaphores...what do you think? I would appreciate any constructive critisism or suggestions. Thanks a lot. Peace.
Posted by terrazon i want to see all fuck stories
I was 18 so was my mate Shane. He asked me to stay in his house and I said yes. His had one of the biggest porn collections in the world haha. That night at his house we went up to his room to watch a porn film to my suprize he quickly ripd his clothes off...