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Posted by LucOuarm
Big build up -- then you cut it off as it starts to warm up. No one likes that.
Posted by Alex
yeh definatly needs to be longer, but otherwise pretty well done
Posted by dory
hey just wanted to let you know that i thought ur story was great...it had an actual story to it. it didnt just jump straight into the sex, very well done and keep up the good work....feel free to review my stories they are both in group sex stories and one is called 'work' and the other is 'a nice stroll in the park....' by katie johns thanx and once again great story
Posted by Arthur
I enjoyed your story but the other people are right, it was cut off a bit towards the end. The writing style was simple which made it easy to read and follow. Good start.
Posted by Alex J
if u decide to write a sequel, which u should it would make this good story a great one...keep up the good work
Posted by Just For Fun
Thanks for all your comments. I'm glad you enjoyed the story and I will be writing more. I did end it a little sudden but don't worry, the next installment will have a lot more action. I'll continue with the same story line and build on it.
Thanks again
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