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Posted by scott
extremely hot! i got as turned on as cliff.
Posted by scott
extremely hot! i got as turned on as cliff.
Posted by LucOuarm
A bit short, and it needed better editing, but a nice little tale.
Posted by Dibrom
I feel as if I've fucked you. That was wicked, if your a chick you've been fucked by me, if your a guy, then your damn good as writing as a chick. Anyhow, if anyone criticizes this one, then they don't know how to read erotic stories, this is a gem. I don't know how you writers of erotica do it on this site, but you all seem to copy a format. Well anyway you have mastered it I find. It was NO not too short. For this story the timing of the ending was like fluke. Great, an admierer. I c you've claimed to be well read, well good for you... Most good writers do that.
Posted by Dibrom
about this story too, I think the "jumps" into action, or into flaring up the pace, was done with a subtle yet strong manuverability that is impressive. Write! Your brain their is like a emotional computer with it's superior calculations. Continue to tweak the human condition, the aura of sex is a specialty. Is their a muse for sex? It's helping you I think. Anyhow, I like dramatic effects, I like to shower myself through this only because I truely do admire your writing here. I'm somewhat jealous I'll admit it. Even if I shouldn't be !!! Well take it as you will, all I hope for is that your eyes will behold the humble praise I pour out to you. From one human in void to another, our predicament NEEDS love. I think you have measure and talent .....
Posted by Dibrom
I meant to say that you calculate subtly your moves to arousing the reader, and the move turns out suddenly (which means the movement was swift, opposed to abruptly) and sharply you are able to pierce the reader with excitement. That is my main analysis of this specific story of yours. this is "THE CLUB" . Your other two stories show off another side of yours that is markedly different than this one's. Yet I see the relation. You prolonged that subtelty in the other ones, very well adapted to your more romantic stories, as well as more realistic and thus I suppose in one sphere superior stories.
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