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Posted by Randi Younge, another author here
I love this new author's work. It really belongs in the lesbian category too. I look forward to more of her work.
Posted by hitchhiker
This story read flatter than a pancake , although the idea was extremely good and could have been expressed much better with a little thought and imagination. Also the author fell into the old trap of people who's first language is not English all the tenses were the wrong time frame.
Should the author read this review I would be most pleased to act as thier editor before future work is posted. I'm not saying my works are master pieces but I do have English as my first language and also have taught conversation in the far East.
Posted by Anonymous
Holy shit that story sucked! No offence but you need imagination and slang what young woman or teenager would say "genitals"? And what kind of name is cool? You're also very full of yourself.
The guy above this reveiw who says his website has better stories is a prick. Brainy? You call yourself brainy you self-obessed dick? Fuck You! and Ros, that next story should be a lot better than this one, it sucked
Posted by Brainydudehater
THIS IS DEVOTED TO BRAINYDUDE. FUCK YOU YOU SELF-OBESSED PRICK! ANONYMOUS WAS RIGHT AND I BET YOU WEBSITE SUCKS COCK LIKE YOU DO YOU GAY DICK!
FUCK YOU!
Posted by 21hot_and_sexy_chick
This report was sooooooo booooorrrring!!!! IT sucked. Better luck next time:(
Posted by BigCock
LMAO! Someone needs English lessons, but it was ok otherwise...
Posted by kzhtu toqhfpick
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