Posted by dave Ever heard of punctuation? Not every sentence needs to end in "!!!" The story was okay, but it was presented horribly. Boring!
Posted by Bill You know, people occasionally use periods or question marks without surrounding exclaimation points. Which sounds natural to you: Hello, how're you doing today?
Fine, thanks. Or Hello, how're you doing today!?!?!?!?!?
Fine, thanks!!!!!!!!!!!
Posted by elaine Hot story. Made me very excited.
Posted by tod this story is great i wish you wrote another one.
Posted by Angie P. AWESOME STORY
Posted by Raven look, you really need to loose the three exclamation points at the end of every sentance. I quote " 'How many applications do you think we have now,' Dr. Horton asked his research assistant, Doris Brewer!?!" Does that really seem like a "!?!" opportunity? I didn't think so.
Posted by askme wow
Posted by gay gay
Posted by dsa WAY TO MANY "!?!"s u killed a gud storyline
Posted by jolly7 excelent
Posted by Gokul It just made me to masturbate but i wanted something more
Posted by Terry i love that
Posted by betterthanyou fail