Posted by trixy wheres the rest of the story! write an ending dammit! i want her to get fucked in the ass really hard
Posted by h this story is so boring...
Posted by CK I really wanted to see the part II of this story, it was so turned on to me. Hearing that he came in her, actually...I also want to her her gotten pregnant and stuff like that too...
Posted by asas i want the 2nd part of the story....i wanted her to be get fucked in every way and i wanted to get her pregant too...........she have to suffer more punishment..
Posted by L uhmm don't know how "h" could think this was boring but anyway... very good!! can't wait to see part 2
Posted by Jenna great story
Posted by sweetnsensual anxiously awaiting part 2, you were wonderfully descriptive and cruel, I loved it!!
Posted by StripperBunnie Hey! On a first note, GREAT STORY! Cruel, yet a total turn on! But lets get real...she's going to want death more than this kind of pain. She's going to plot...OMG I don't want to/cannot imagine that kind of pain! As for the guy...hehe...go him! Lolz! Well I sooo am going to read part 2! More fucking!!!
Posted by Aaron dammit... hurry up and write a part 2... and 3... and 4!!!
Posted by tho what a sick story,
this is way to perverted it is unbelievable
Posted by BucketMan lol yeah man write the rest of it... make him cram a bat into her asshole or something =D
Posted by BucketMan btw... 'tho' you're probably the most turned on by it all hahaha
Posted by Garnet I thought it sucked, but its twisted. She better get pregnant and all.
Posted by culfire write part 2 this is a nice and twisted story more please!!
Posted by sweetnsensual still waiting for part two....or is that part of the punishment?????
Posted by Jay Where is part 2 already....I want to read part 2.
Posted by Amy write the ending already!
Posted by bear This reads like "See Spot run, see him play." Don't bother to post part 2. In fact, why don't you eliminate part 1.
Posted by dirtygirl OMG what a hot story, I loved it when he whipped her asshole/and inside her pussylips while she held herself open! You need to finish writing it, I want him to fuck her ass so hard he breaks it open or SOMETHING!!!
Posted by Lisa AWESOME STORY! It is absolutely hot, and sickeningly evil! Best story ever written!
Posted by Craze Beaten, raped, lying sore and only half coherent with a beast's filthy seed dripping out of her battered sex, something inside of her snapped.
He has to die, she thought. He has to die. Never in her life had she seriously thought about murdering another human being, yet now these thoughts consumed her. She was beyond desperation, beyond hate, beyond good or evil; at this time, now, in which hope died and somewhere she could imagine the devil cackling with glee, somewhere deep inside her a savagery that she previously could never have imagined emerged like a demon butterfly from a rotten chrysalis.
I'm too weak, she thought, shifting her body with a low moan in order to hide her grit teeth from the hideous scumbag who stroked his grotesque member while admiring his gory handiwork. But every man has a weakness, she thought. I don't any time; it's either move now or not at all.
"Get ready for round two, slut," she heard him cackle, audibly licking his lips like they were covered in barbeque sauce.
He won't expect it, not now, she thought, sitting up and not having to fake a dazed expression. Slowly, carefully, she feigned complete submission--which, unfortunately, a part of her also did not have to fake--and leaned forward with her touch sticking out, moving towards his pulsing member, still wet and blood from her savaged vagina.
"Yeah, bitch, you better get used givin' me head," he said, cackling again as his meat entered her mouth.
Slowly, delicately, she slid his member deeper into her through and grasped it with her hand at the base. "Uh 'us 'eed 'um 'evuhredge" she mumbled into his cock.
"What's that, bitch?" he said.
I just need some leverage, she thought, grinning like the Cheshire cat before suddenly squeezing the base of his cock with all her might and biting down hard. Before he could even get out half a yell, though, she used her leverage. Simultaneously she pulled down with the hand grasping the base of his cock and thrust up with her fist, putting her whole body into an uppercut.
Straight into his nuts.
"RRRAAAAAAAGGGGGGGGGGGHHHHHH!!!!!!" the beast yelled, pushing her away and folding into himself before falling to the flooring, rolling and growling like the beast he was.
No running, she thought, forcing her sore and battered body to move. Can't let him recover to chase me and probably catch me. Men are vulnerable in the crotch, but everybody has a neck.
Somehow she stood, but for a few seconds she was overcome by dizziness. Shit, no, no, have to move! Some his growls started becoming coherant, and staring down at him she saw him look up, their eyes meeting for a moment of pure malice.
I won't be able to do this again, she thought, while at the same time falling, extending her elbow. Time seemed to slow down. Let my aim be true... she growled in her head.
"Biittc--gccchh!" he yelled, cut off into a squeaking splutter as her elbow hit his neck.
Shit, that had to have...she thought, but the gentle, unforgiving blackness of unconsciousness took her away mid-thought. "How does it feel to have killed the man who beat and raped you?"
"Damn good," she replied, to which the audience of the talk show stood up, clapping and cheering. She looked pointed beyond the 4th wall. "Anyone who gets a kick out of rape is a sicko." = P hahahahaha
Posted by Jessica This story got me so wet I am ready to be fucked hard
Posted by kris Pleasecontinue the storie it was great.
Posted by michael that is one SICK story!!!
Posted by michael that is one SICK story!!!
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Do some good jobs
Better than this
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Posted by nasa tamo oh that made me so horny my pussy's wet oh please hump me baby stick your peb peeb