One Lonley Night

(Part 1 from 1)

My name is Lou Vena, I am 18 years old, I am 6’4”, I used to play as a defensive lineman in high school, so I am rather bulky at 280. But im not bad looking, I have short brown hair, blue green eyes, a “contagious” smile, and I am fortunate to be blessed with a very romantic heart. Yet I have not found someone to share my romance with beacuase of one woman, a woman who has changed my life, saved me from almost committing the stupidest act of my life. Yet she stood by me through all of the worst of times, all without ever have seeing her face. 

My story starts out 6 years ago, I met a wonderful woman named Lay Valentine. To me she was the most absolute picture of perfection, even though have never seen her face. You see we meet online, role-playing characters in AOL chats, it took 3 years to actually realize what an amazing person she was, in the mean time I was a complete asshole to her. I lied about my identity, who I was and what I looked like. But she didn’t care. She made me promise to never lie again to her. So I kept my promise, I didn’t lie again, and I made sure to tell her my true feelings for her, a few years ago Lay and I separated because she needed something more then the relationship that we had over the phone. I understood, I really didn’t want to, but I had to, I owed that much to her, for her to be happy.

For the past couple of weeks Lay and I have had small conversations over the phone, usually because she is horney, and that is because her new boyfriend is a total moron and doesn’t even know how to turn her on. (Ha, HAHA! Sorry..) So meanwhile I try to find time for Lay, because, of course, being the softy I am, I still have feelings for her. Well tonight happened to be different, I was spending another long lonely night at my house again when I got a phone call from Lay “Lou, let me in its cold!” 

Meanwhile I am completely stunned, “Huh?” wondering if she’s delirious or something.

“I’m at your house now let me in I’m fucking freezing.” Lay replies

“Your where? Here? Now? How?” confused, I stumble around off of my couch, reaching for the door to the outside.

As the door swings open “Hey there!” Lay yells. Holy hell, she’s here, at my house, after 6 years? But how, so many questions but I can only think to say one thing.

“Uhhhhhhhhhh…..” What a dumbass Lou! The girl that you have loved and known for 6 years is right in front of you and the best thing you can think to say is uh? U better hit yourself! Moron. 

Lay goes on “You mind if I come in its cold here in Cali. Must be the humidity.”

Fumbling for the right words to say “Oh, yea please come in, sorry.” Swaying her sassy ass through the door, she looked stunning, tight low rider jeans, a thin white wife beater, the cloth so thin you could make out her black bra underneath, her eyes, the same stunning blue eyes I gazed at so longingly in her picture. I look over her sweet, little body, lustfully thinking of all the good times that we have promised each other. Her soft curvatious hips swaying with each step of her walk, the lust I once felt so deep, so animal, finding its courage as the woman I have loved for so long is finally with me. With thought racing through my head I ask “Could I get you something warm to drink?” as I walk over to the gas fireplace, turning it on.

Getting comfortable Lay replies “Yea, a good hot coco would be great.” 


At her remark, like a slave drivin by a heart pounding thought of what was to become of her visit. As I make her hot coco, I ask “So this is really a surprise, what are you doing here?”

“My parents and I took a trip to Taho and I took a cab to here because they gave me $800 for the week were spending here” Lay replies.

“Wow, that’s really cool, I'm soo happy to see you I really have wanted to see you for a really long time, and now u just show up at my doorstep, HA, wow now I feel like a complete moron.”

“No your not a moron, I just wanted to surprise you, so.. surprise” Lay replies, my mind wanders over her body slowly as I walk to her with her hot coco. Her eyes are so amazing; I couldn’t tear myself from just staring at her “what are u finding so interesting?” Lay inquires.

“You, you amaze me, you baffle me, you are the most gorgeous woman I have ever meet, and yet I still cant help but think of how really and truly wonderful you are, ever since I have meet you, you have helped me become a better man, and somehow, someway, everything about you makes me mesmerized, and you create something inside me that truly I have never felt before.” Without thinking the words flow from my mouth, like a gushing waterfall, my heart pours out to her without even really thinking.

“Oh, Lou you are such a romantic, that’s really sweet!” as she began to tell me this, I leaned over to her, kissing her softly on the lips, the kiss I have waited for soo long, is here, now, and is completely, utterly magnificent! Her lips are so tender, so soft, the sweetness of her delicate lips waft into my head, as my tongue slowly rolls along her soft lips, separating her lips softly, I slide my hand around her back, bringing her soft, hot, body closer to me, letting my other hand flows down her soft hair, over her soft neck, as I kiss her deeper, her hands are running over my chest, as I keep my hands roaming over her soft body, our kiss turns from soft and sensual to wild and lustful, are arms are intertwined lifting off each others shirts, our hand now grasp together as our bodies meet skin to skin, well almost, THE BRA MUST COME OFFF! So I take her hand in mine as I take her hands in back of her so that I could get access to her bra. Yet to my surprise she resists, and to my pleasure she runs her hands through my hair as our tongues meet and roll around each others mouths, I think to myself “ holy hell shes amazing” as her whole body flows with the kiss, her hips grinding into mine, our bodies mingling, our tongues dancing. All to an invisible beat that is set by us.

This is the type of thing that two people who know each other like the back of their hand could have. My lust for her grows with my impatience to get her naked, not caring about how good it would be, me being a guy, I want it now and I want it good. Well lay has other ideas; she knows all of my fetishes, all of my turn-on’s. She is amazing, she stands in front of me as she reaches for my hands, I stand up with her as she jumps up, straddling me around the waist, her soft lips find mine again as my hands move to her ass, squeezing her soft cheeks lightly, as our tongues once again intertwine, I take my steps carefully not knowing what is in front of me as I make my way up the stairs to my room. My fingers softly brush over Lays hot wet snatch as I squeeze her ass again as I lay Lay onto my bed, I crawl up over her, kissing her passionately over her lips as my embrace releases my lips travel across the soft flesh of her cheeks over to her small earlobe, longing to make Lay feel so good, I suckle softly over her earlobe, nibbling slightly, as I take my lips away my breathing is ragged and I continue down over her sweet neck, running my tongue down her to shoulders, I kiss the small of her neck slowly running my tongue back up her neck under her chin kissing her softly on the lips. I don’t hold this kiss very long, knowing I have more important areas to cover, my soft warm lips make their way across Lay chest, and over her Bra covered breasts, as I wrap my mouth around it as far as I could, I breath a hot breath into the thin fabric, running my tongue over the slight bulge of her hardening nipple, my free hand waders to the other breast as I run my fingers softly over her supple breasts, my fingertips brazing her hard nipple.

I hear her breathing, she is really turned on, her breaths are quick and sharp, soft moans escaping her beautiful lips. I’m doing it, I’m getting her really and truly turned on, good god this is so fuckin hot, common Lou pace yourself, make her cum nice and long.

My tongue flickers lightly over her nipple, as it is now hard and completely in my control, I very slightly press my teeth to her sweet nipple, as I roll my jaw slightly twisting the nipple ever so slightly but her moans tell a different story of pure pleasure. My hand now finished in its work, moved over the cloth to the front of her bra undoing the clasp holding Lay in. Her Beautiful red nipples are so gorgeous, so hard, just screaming to be sucked. I give in to their call, my mouth dives over the bare flesh of Lays breasts, and with glee I begin to suck and lick and tweak her nipple ever so slightly, it is wonderous, the taste, the feel, the sensation, its enough to make me …. To make me… Do a whole lot more!

My mind floods of thoughts of Lays sweet honey pot, my hand has already decided to make the journey, and my mouth and my tongue decide to play a little catch up. My hand reaches over her tight jeans undoing the button and zipping down the zipper. The moans coming from Lay are picking up momentum, her breath is becoming more ragged, and her hips are starting to buck into my hand, my poor darling must be really close for her to be fucking air. I pull down her tight jeans revealing the sexiest sight I have ever seen, the panties that I bought for her were encasing her sopping wet pussy. Oh my god this is going to be great, her smell fills my nose, the intoxicating scent of her beautiful pussy is driving me nuts, my fingers slowly pull away the wet fabric as I see her clean shavin’ pussy staring me in the face. It is a beautiful sight a very sexy, and very appealing sight; I wrap my mouth around her soft tight pussy as my tongue digs deep into luscious cunt. I can hear Lay gasp as my mouth sucks deep on her sopping wet cunt

Under my tongue I run a finger over her opening as I slide my middle finger deeply into her finger fucking her slowly. I groan lowly into her beautiful pussy, as her hips buck into my face, her legs wrapping around my head like a boa constrictor. She screams in pleasure for me to go faster as her fingers run through my hair. My finger starts to fuck her faster as my tongue slowly makes its way in-between her lips to the small lil clit. Lay moan louder “Yes Lou, YES!!! OHHHH… OOOOHHHHHH… OOOHHHHHHHHH!!!!! OOOOOOOOOOO FUCK YES!!!” her hips franticly fuck my face as my tongue flicks around her sweet little clit. Then all of the sudden she stops, as her whole body tightens a muffled scream is heard underneath a pillow as her first orgasm of the night rocks through her hot body. I keep fingering her and licking her faster and faster, her orgasm keeping her body spasming as her orgasm just keeps cumming and cumming, her legs are keeping me so close to her tight lil cunnie that its making it difficult to breath, but I don’t care, I’m making her cum like she has never came before. Her cum is drenching my face, covering me in it, my chin drips from the amount that is still rushing over my face, I feel her pussy start to slowly stop spasming as I feel the grip of her legs around my head start to losses and I gasp for air, her orgasm keeping me under for almost a whole minute, holy shit what a rush, lay starts to relax as she lays back her eyes closing softly as she starts to fall asleep, I crawl back up to her, her cum still dripping off my goatee as I kiss her softly, her lips suck softly on my lip as her tongue slips out of her mouth tasting herself on my lips. She wraps her arms around me and lays a leg over me as she starts to drift off to sleep, my raging hard on still pressing hard against the metal bars of my zipper. I decide it was all worth it and slowly drift off to sleep with her. 

Good Night! I’m leaving the other third for Lay to write, and then I will finish up the rest of the story. Please send your comments about my story it is my first I’m open for any comments you can dish out!

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