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My first threesome! reviews
Posted by Dave
Great story! I was only able to make it through the first paragraph before "he" was standing at attention. Good detail on how you looked and felt...probably could have used more descriptors on the actual act. But, really good!
Posted by Gary
Melissa, great story, I loved the way you described how you dressed. I would like to hear more about how you prepared yourself, shaving, makeup ect. You sound like a hot piece of ass in real life if this is how you write in private. I look forward to reading more.
Posted by Al
Not a bad story, I normally like stories writen by women, from the womans point of view.
Melissa, you could proof read some more; There were a few typos for example you used here for hear, and some of the flow of the text was clunky... for example. "My dress is above my hips and a pull it down." I think the phrase should have been, "My dress is above my hips now, and I pull it down/off."
I enjoyed the story very much, I hope you continue to write as your story is very good.
Posted by Melissa
Thanks guys on the review. It was such a great experience, I had to share it with you all. I find from reading most of the stories that they seem to be generic and not reality based or actual stories. I think I made the telling of the story seem real and the typos, which I try to avoid, makes is much more real. Thanks again, and I want you all to write me to tell me do something real time and then I'll write about it. Thanks again,
Melissa
Posted by Jay
Great story Melissa, I liked the detail, how you described what you were wearing was excellent
Posted by SEVERUSMAX
Love the idea of this kind of threesome, although I still prefer 2 girls and a guy. Group sex is hot, period!
Posted by Fazza, UK
Hi there Melissa, Its a great story!
I want to see what you really look like? Is this ok?
Just a normal pic is cool.
Posted by ray
GREAT STORY MELISSA. I ENJOYED EVERYBIT, HOWEVER WOULD LOVE TO HEAR YOUR EXPERIENCES WITH FAMILY MEMBERS TOO, PLEASE WRITE TO ME. THANKS rallzn1@yahoo.com
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