Jessica and Jonathan losing their virginity. reviews
Posted by Steve An amazing story. I give it a 5 out of 5. The writing was perfect. I loved how you didn't rush into the sex and let the reader antisipate the love. Most writers on this site do not emphasize actual love and write things like "As soon as I saw her/him we ran into a room and we fucked", but you are different. You let the reader see the blossom of the two lovers and the story never felt rushed or sleezy. I enjoyed the use of many, many adjectives and your interesting metaphors. I hope to see more stories from you.
Posted by brent I agree, truly amazing... 5 out of 5. one of the best i've ever read, great buildup, i dont know what else to say but that it was very good. so much better then about 99% of the other stories on this site, great job....
Posted by The Infamous Evil Spike I agree that it was much better than the other shit you get around here which is unrealistic and is all about fucking.
Posted by You Nasty Bitch Not a bad story. But your a fucked up momma if you liked watching your daughter getthe shit fucked out of her.
Posted by Joe A very well written story. The author did a very good job.
Posted by Ian This was an amazing story, great job. Probably one of the best stories I've ever read.
Posted by MB that is a good ass story
i love it
Posted by annonimouse o my frickin god this story was soooo HOT OMG!!!!! i have never goten off like tat before now i cant wait to fall inlove and hold off our first time untill she is ready and then we go at it. this story was by far THE BEST story i have read and i have read almost all the storys on here
Posted by hopeless romantic bitch i love the story. it's doesn't only talk about sex but it shows the power of love. amazing story.
Posted by amy wow, that was the greatest sex story i have ever read in my whole life so much detail it was great you could be an author!
Posted by jessica This has got to be the most beautiful story on here. Romantic, slow building, great character development, lots of thought and when it came, incredible mind blowing sex. Ten out of ten.
Posted by trisha this was the most amazing story. it is kind of weird that your the one who wrote it considering your her mum. but never the less amazing. this is the best story i have ever read
Posted by jane wow, amazing, what a sexy story. omg it was so romantic as well as sexy. i loved it. ten out of ten
Posted by jason wow, great story, full of romance leading to beautiful sex. its the best story i have read on here