Posted by Teri I loved this one, makes me think back to the day when I started up, all before the age of 20, wished I had a first time like this! Thank you for the new story, excellent use of imagery!
Posted by Carlos Very nice story. I like this one very much because it has some sort of a story in it, not just pure sex. Seems like you have put a lot of effort into this writing. Well, it's worthy to write more erotic story just like this one. Longing to look over at it again soon.
Posted by Brittany I was hoping for a happy ending, but the story is still very good.