Check&Rate our erotic personals! Posted by Kate wow... someone didn't go to school...
Posted by ? Im prove your english and writing skills then submit a story. I chouldn't even finish your story because I had te bigest head ache after the first paragraph
Posted by your worst nightmare i fort story great coz it just amazing.......errrrrr....somebody needs to take lessons in englsh language then maybe you can think about submiting a story, worse story i've read yet
Posted by YOU'RE AN ASSHOLE!!! You really turn my stomach!!! Not only are you a totally sick fucker, but you are a shitty writer!
Posted by Sameera Hi this is Sameera i like your story but it tend to just blast away . Rather u could or should have made it a bit more holding. to fuck me mail me at
Posted by SeXiGuRl Yeah if you learned how to write...or even talk
(I assume this is how you talk since you wrote so poorly) the story could be better. I have to agree with ?. It really hurt my head to read.