Posted by me I know of middle school students who could write better stories with more acurate grammer.
Posted by joe ya no kidding haha
Posted by joe ya no kidding haha
Posted by slam ok kid go to back to your little preschool and stay out of these adults sites ok.
Posted by Mollicia That was the worst writing I've ever seen. My dog can write better. Learn how to use punctuations and next time if there will ever be another next time for pathetic writing, have a plot, ok not a plot but a story that actually makes since.
Posted by Bob The Builder Fo rizzle my nizzle.
Posted by aytinch Ouch, my eyes hurt. could have been a good story but the writing ruined it.
While Virginia was holding on to the chair with a vise like grip, Chris had a hand full of
fat white ass in each of his large hands that used for leverage on each and every plunge!...
