Posted by stepfather Great story
Posted by hank great story
Posted by fuckman Well written but could be shorter!!!
Posted by Bruce sucks ass
Posted by reviewer Well written, and I don't think it's too long. It's a great style.
Posted by anne how is it revenge if he's not doing anything to them? well written though.
Posted by Amit Tommy Bansal It can be called as a self proclaimed revenge.
Posted by ddaaall meh
Posted by the daughter it was a really good story i liked it u should make more like this
Posted by John I'm sorry, but I didn't really like this story. The only sex was the wimpy man jerking off, really. I expected some really sexy scenes of him catching the girls doing a bit more than just showering.
Posted by emu expletives?? this a sex story site not "bedtime reading for the young and innocent". Also, you spend half a page talking about the design of a perfect peeping mechanism, just say he cut a hole in the wall! And is Ned short for nerd because he sounds like one: a nice neat man who can't even stand up to his wife. Despite that, good effort ...
keep writing
Posted by SEVERUSMAX Revenge would be to get a new job, and dump her right before you start it!
Posted by Susan Wow; this was nice. I had to touch myself. Sweet revenge.
Cindy and Linda, locked in a relationship of mind control, in an agreement that lasts a year, one as mistress, one as slave. And that year is almost up -- time to switch places!